If you Smile

You always blame,

this world is unfair,

yes it is,

but if you can smile,

wont everything be better?

 

If you can smile,

I will hold your hands,

whisper to your ears,

this world isn't that bad,

just see how you see it,

maybe someone is crying,

but if you can smile......

Author's Note

What do you think?? I will add a photo soon, cause libary computer wont let me to download or upload anyhting!

Reviews

[HereWithoutYou<3]

I think if you smile, then everything somehow looks brighter. But... When you can't you can't force yourself to either. Look at life for it's beauty I always say.

[Leanne Conway]

This world is unfair,
People should know that.
I only everyone knew how to smile and not be depressed, I'm sure this world wouldn't seem so unfair like everyone thinks it is.
-LeaLea

[Dalebear]

The world can be a very unfair place to be in but as I always been told there is always someone out there worse of then you.

Dalebear

[Alicia™]

The world is unfair sometimes, but it's worse for some than it is for others.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your words. I try to smile and go forward. Disappointment is just education to make us stronger and appreciate the good moment. A positive and strong poem. Thank you Cynthia. I always enjoy how you look at life.
Coyote

[HopelesslyDevoted]

awww this is adorable! i have a pesimistic view by nature, but lately i have had some wonderful friends come to my rescue and remind me to smile. i love it!
it feels so good to smile when you know others collect joy from seeing it!

[ravena]

I feels like if we just smiled the world would get better and all the troubles would go away! I enjoyed this

[RED]

Just a few typos here and there, like 'sile' should be 'smile' and 'yuor' should be 'your'.But other than that, good job.Its a beautiful poem with a nice message.
Keep writing
~Red

[Short.Nerd]

You have a few typos but it's good.

[Linear]

Such an easy thing to do, yet so many people dont find anything to smile about, but your poem made me smile, thank you, on a more critical note, please take your time and read through this, and you will see the few errors, I think perhaps you were in a rush