Online Mistake

Online Mistake

A Story by Cynthia

I typed

Lily: Hi!

He replied after a few second

Sam: LOL, free to talk?

Lily : Yeah, sure, why?

Sam: Remember this is the second day we have an online date?

Lily: Of course! That's just yesterday, why?

Sam : I know you will remember, and I sort of want to started dating you online again.

Lily : You don't decide to date me 'in person'?

Sam : No.

Lily : why? ><

Sam : I enjoy online date better.

Lily : I don't even knew you in person!

Sam : You don't need to.

Lily : You aspect me to like... wait for you forever?

Sam : Yes

Lily: Freak!

Sam : I am A Freak!

Yes, he is a freak, no one date me like this, I mean, at least I know how he looked like.

Is not that I wont date him if he is an ugly guy, but I need to know, so maybe I will say hi if I see him at the street.

Lily: I can truly tell that, no one date like that.

Sam : I am not a normal guy you will see on street.

Lily : I think so, you are so weird for me.

Sam : So what> stop dating me?

Lily : Not really.

I seriously can't stop 'dating' this guy, he is so mysterious!

Sam : then, it's finish, I mean this topic.

Lily : Fine, I think I can handle the disappointment.

Sam : Better if you can.

Lily : Understand sir, I wont ask you this kind of question again!

Sam: Great, go to go.

Lily : LOL, we just started.

Sam: No! I NEED to go

Lily : Fine.


Sam was so weird! I wonder who he is......


Two months Later


I can't imagine that who Sam is. After two months of search, he turned out to be my older brother! Really, was that a joke? All the days I used to be in love, but... with my brother?


I bet I wont go online dating ever again. Not when your brother turned his name from Jake to 'Sam' the so hot guy I UESD to be in love with.

© 2010 Cynthia


Author's Note

Cynthia
Really, you never know the one instant messaging you is who, especially when you are online. That's NO REAL!

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Well if I were the brother I wouldve give. My sister a long talk. But the ending was funny. Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


he is your brother? well that makes me trust online dating even less that i already do,which is a lot, cool work xD

Posted 14 Years Ago


okay this conversation is so great!!! i love it, so fabulous, LOL...can't just stop laughing... =D

Posted 14 Years Ago


You are too young for online dating. I'm 53 years old and have little trust for the internet. Real people is what we need. Nothing better then human contact and good conversation. A interesting story in your poem. I hope you learn a lesson. I was ask to have a internet affair. I asks the person what was a internet affair? She left me alone. A very good story. You made me think again.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago



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