Online Mistake

I typed

Lily: Hi!

He replied after a few second

Sam: LOL, free to talk?

Lily : Yeah, sure, why?

Sam: Remember this is the second day we have an online date?

Lily: Of course! That's just yesterday, why?

Sam : I know you will remember, and I sort of want to started dating you online again.

Lily : You don't decide to date me 'in person'?

Sam : No.

Lily : why? ><

Sam : I enjoy online date better.

Lily : I don't even knew you in person!

Sam : You don't need to.

Lily : You aspect me to like... wait for you forever?

Sam : Yes

Lily: Freak!

Sam : I am A Freak!

Yes, he is a freak, no one date me like this, I mean, at least I know how he looked like.

Is not that I wont date him if he is an ugly guy, but I need to know, so maybe I will say hi if I see him at the street.

Lily: I can truly tell that, no one date like that.

Sam : I am not a normal guy you will see on street.

Lily : I think so, you are so weird for me.

Sam : So what> stop dating me?

Lily : Not really.

I seriously can't stop 'dating' this guy, he is so mysterious!

Sam : then, it's finish, I mean this topic.

Lily : Fine, I think I can handle the disappointment.

Sam : Better if you can.

Lily : Understand sir, I wont ask you this kind of question again!

Sam: Great, go to go.

Lily : LOL, we just started.

Sam: No! I NEED to go

Lily : Fine.

Sam was so weird! I wonder who he is......

Two months Later

I can't imagine that who Sam is. After two months of search, he turned out to be my older brother! Really, was that a joke? All the days I used to be in love, but... with my brother?

I bet I wont go online dating ever again. Not when your brother turned his name from Jake to 'Sam' the so hot guy I UESD to be in love with.

Author's Note

Really, you never know the one instant messaging you is who, especially when you are online. That's NO REAL!

Reviews

[poetic soul]

liked the read...unexpected!!!

[HereWithoutYou<3]

Well, that was a surprising twist... o.o I like it. You would've never saw that coming!

[Leanne Conway]

Whoa :P

[Dalebear]

Crazy but good write

[Linear]

The moral of this story is make sure of all things, or simply dont believe a word.

[Undying Glory]

wow i have to agree, really freaky write. now that's the problem with online chatting. rest assured that no one's gonna scam you on this website except maybe for an inconsiderate few. anyway nice job!

[Marie Harrison]

Wow, wasn't expecting that. You're right, you never know. It's hard enough when you are having face to face contact with someone. I suppose you have to proceed with caution. Wonderful job.

[ravena]

THat is crazy yo super ! crazy !

[Loner]

Sounds creepy and scary at the same time , online dating is like a shot in the dark u never know who is on the other end.

[Kimberly]

I think you could really make this into something. Right now it's more a skeletal outline than a fully fledged story. I do love the twist ending, though, a little creepy, a little funny.