Blank

I feel blank,
I feel nothing,
but serious pain.

I feel blank,
I feel nothing,
but a not working heart,
which is still beating.

I feel so blank,
I can do nothing,
or feel anything.

Yes,
now I am blank,
don't hurt me,
although I can't feel,
I can't think,
just don't

Author's Note

bit of confusing, right?

Reviews

[Kimberly]

Confusing, but sometimes emotion is.

[Moonflower]

Conflicting emotional pain and weariness...wanting to give up, but you cant. Thats how this made me feel, at least. Thank you for sharing.

[sarah]

kinda confusing yes lol

[Linear]

To feel a hurt so deep that it leaves one numb, it can only mean a love gone bad. Good poem used with emotion

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Very deep indeed; and feeling nothing sucks, it's like there's something wrong with you but you don't know what it is. Good job! Keep it up~

[Coyote Poetry]

Being without emotion and feelings is a bad state. I like the direction of this poem. A very good ending to a very interesting poem. A very good poem. Made me think this morning.
Coyote