All I want Is YOU

All I want Is YOU

A Poem by Cynthia

Helding hands of you,
my heart speeds up,
there are voices everywhere,
but none of us care,
we gaze into each others eyes,
perfectly still,
only our feet is moving,
everythign seems to stop
We all knew,
the night has come,
we can enjoy,
each others love,
without a secret.

All I want is you,
no one can seperate us.

© 2010 Cynthia


Author's Note

Cynthia
Do you get such feeling when you have a crush? Cause I don't know, never been in love!

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This is exactly what happens when in love Cynthia .
Beautifully portrayed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


sort of, although i have to say when i fall in love i fall fast and hard. i get way more serious quicker than most people. lol something that is probably not the best personality trait sense one is more likely to get hurt. but when i am falling it doesn't really matter because it feels so good!!
this is a great description of such a cute crush! love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this feeling, it's like you're the only two people in the world. Great poem. It's inspiring. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


oh i know this feeling to well, gotta be careful who you like though, nice one

Posted 13 Years Ago



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