All I want Is YOU

Helding hands of you,
my heart speeds up,
there are voices everywhere,
but none of us care,
we gaze into each others eyes,
perfectly still,
only our feet is moving,
everythign seems to stop
We all knew,
the night has come,
we can enjoy,
each others love,
without a secret.

All I want is you,
no one can seperate us.

Author's Note

Do you get such feeling when you have a crush? Cause I don't know, never been in love!

Reviews

[HereWithoutYou<3]

I've gotten that feeling. The sweaty palms. Rosy cheeks, the nervous stuttering. But I guess it never ended that way. They were just crushes after all. :)

Good poem, love how you put your words in there, even if you haven't experienced it. That's a great writing skill. :)

[Short.Nerd]

A few typos but other than that good job,

[Linear]

In love yes, the world stops spinning, you see only perfection and no flaws, or is that infatuation probably, sweet poem, the first line needs some attention

[Sweets]

"verythign seems to stop" Everything :)
A typing mistake
This is such a beautiful poem
Great job

[Dinesh Sairam]

'Holding', 'Everything' - typos I guess. A simple and blissful piece. And don't say 'never been in love'. It necessarily doesn't have to be the Love of humans alone.

Keep writing.

(PS. I've written such a Night Love piece. So, when you have time, kindly review my 'Tonight' poem. It's just about the top. You shouldn't have much trouble finding it).

[Marie Harrison]

Yes, what an uplifting feeling. Floating like a red balloon in the cotton candy sky, without a care in the world. Love it!

[Kimberly]

Love, to me, is more daily than that. That moment, though, I felt on my wedding day, seven years ago, when we were dancing to our second dance. It was a moment that was as fragile and special as a soap bubble.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great written poem that describes a deep crush vividly!

[sarah]

Yes you do amazing feelings weird feelings every kind of feelings this is an amazing poem great work!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and sweet poem of love. The simple touches is what make us feel happy and content. A excellent poem.
Coyote