Don't ask

Don't ask me how much I love you,
nothing can compare to the love,
I spend on you.

Don't ask how much I care,
cause I care everyday,
there's no need to ask.

Don't ask me am I real,
everything I do to you,
is always real.

Don't ask me is it a dream.
cause you can feel it,
feel everythign I show you.

Don't ask anymore,
use you heart to feel.

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[HereWithoutYou<3]

I love it! It's everything I tell my boyfriend everyday, and sometimes he says it back to me. We always end up feeling unloved and since we don't see each other every day, we talk for hours. Just asking each other random questions. And most of them are like these. Yet there is one I've began to ask him because that's just how I feel. " How could anyone love a person like me?"

[Dalebear]

Good write

[Linear]

I think it's very good, you have a style all of your own, and it's sweet

[Short.Nerd]

I like it (: Great job

[Marie Harrison]

Very sweet and endearing poem. Lovely!

[Loner]

Really heart warming and touching!

[Kimberly]

I especially like the first line where you say talk about how much love you 'spend' on them. I've never heard it quite like that but in a way love is a transaction and that's a good way of stating it.

[Adam :P]

use you heart to feel, or use your heart to feel?,
i liked the poem it was good enjoyed it

[HopelesslyDevoted]

I love the ending line, it sums up everything rather well

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good way of explaining feelings..!!! Some good shots played well..!!

Good work..!! Keep sharing..!!