Do whatever you want

Do whatever you want

A Poem by Cynthia
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I will let you do anything,
just to let you love me,
do whatever you want to,
I just want to keep you by my side

© 2010 Cynthia


Author's Note

Cynthia
do it sounds unfinish? If so, I will add more

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It doesn't seem to be unfinished to me, in fact I like it being so short (and it's not often I say that) it seems to add to the desperation of the poem in a way, and I like it this way anyway. Good job, mortal, I liked it, keep it up!~

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Cynthia

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