Do whatever you want

I will let you do anything,
just to let you love me,
do whatever you want to,
I just want to keep you by my side

Author's Note

do it sounds unfinish? If so, I will add more

Reviews

[Dalebear]

You shouldn't totally give yourself to not just anyone. Need to protect yourself aswell. Kind of giving up your rights

Dalebear

[Linear]

Sounds a little erotic, as Marie says you may need some protection. good poem though

[Marie Harrison]

Love it! But don't make offers like this with just anyone. Sorry, the Mom in me is coming out. Ha! Have to protect Miss Cynthia.

[Kimberly]

Actually, I like the brevity of this one. Put a period on the end and you're done.

[Loner]

Leave it as it is ! Beautifully portrayed.

[Coyote Poetry]

A short poem. Strong words describing the desire to give all your love. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

No it speaks for itself! Great job!

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i think it's perfect-an expression of longing :)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

no no don't add more. simple and sweet is the power of many great poems. this is great just the way it is!

[Undying Glory]

yep this is complete. normally i would say that most short poems could be extended but not here. awesome work