No, please, don't

No,
don't go away,
stay with me,
till my end of life.

No,
don't stop loving me,
I love you,
I need you,
don't please,
I can't...
live without you.

No, please, don't leave me

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Dalebear]

Awww the plead to a lover, good write

[Linear]

Aww please dont go. How many lovers have pleaded this way, begging someone to stay, but really it never works that way. Lovely poem

[Marie Harrison]

Fabulous job

[Kimberly]

You convey the emotion you're going for well. I'd fix the few grammatical errors.

[Undying Glory]

wow you've written very well here, i just love this one, it was just really sweet. great job here

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem filled with the desire to be loved and the need to be needed. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Lilly]

Short sweet and simple. Nice work

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what a beautiful-heartfelt poem-lovely :)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

beautiful in simplicity yet again, wonderful job!

[Loner]

This reflects insane yet insecure love of a lover !
beautifully portrayed , great work.