No, please, don't

No, please, don't

A Poem by Cynthia

No,
don't go away,
stay with me,
till my end of life.

No,
don't stop loving me,
I love you,
I need you,
don't please,
I can't...
live without you.

No, please, don't leave me

© 2010 Cynthia


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Awww the plead to a lover, good write

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aww please dont go. How many lovers have pleaded this way, begging someone to stay, but really it never works that way. Lovely poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


Fabulous job

Posted 13 Years Ago


You convey the emotion you're going for well. I'd fix the few grammatical errors.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow you've written very well here, i just love this one, it was just really sweet. great job here

Posted 13 Years Ago


A poem filled with the desire to be loved and the need to be needed. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short sweet and simple. Nice work

Posted 13 Years Ago


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what a beautiful-heartfelt poem-lovely :)


Posted 13 Years Ago


beautiful in simplicity yet again, wonderful job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This reflects insane yet insecure love of a lover !
beautifully portrayed , great work.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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