No, please, don't
A Poem by
Cynthia
No,
don't go away,
stay with me,
till my end of life.
No,
don't stop loving me,
I love you,
I need you,
don't please,
I can't...
live without you.
No, please, don't leave me
© 2010 Cynthia
Author's Note
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Awww the plead to a lover, good write
Posted 13 Years Ago
Aww please dont go. How many lovers have pleaded this way, begging someone to stay, but really it never works that way. Lovely poem
Posted 13 Years Ago
Aww please dont go. How many lovers have pleaded this way, begging someone to stay, but really it never works that way. Lovely poem
Fabulous job
Posted 13 Years Ago
Fabulous job
You convey the emotion you're going for well. I'd fix the few grammatical errors.
Posted 13 Years Ago
You convey the emotion you're going for well. I'd fix the few grammatical errors.
wow you've written very well here, i just love this one, it was just really sweet. great job here
Posted 13 Years Ago
wow you've written very well here, i just love this one, it was just really sweet. great job here
A poem filled with the desire to be loved and the need to be needed. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
A poem filled with the desire to be loved and the need to be needed. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote
Short sweet and simple. Nice work
Posted 13 Years Ago
Short sweet and simple. Nice work
what a beautiful-heartfelt poem-lovely :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
what a beautiful-heartfelt poem-lovely :)
beautiful in simplicity yet again, wonderful job!
Posted 13 Years Ago
beautiful in simplicity yet again, wonderful job!
This reflects insane yet insecure love of a lover !
beautifully portrayed , great work.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This reflects insane yet insecure love of a lover !
beautifully portrayed , great work.
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Added on December 21, 2010
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Cynthia Hong Kong
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