I am not Hiding

I am not Hiding

A Poem by Cynthia

I am not hiding anymore,
I am coming out,
showing you what I think,
I am not hiding anything now,
not my feeling,
not my thoughts,
there's no need to lie now,
there is no need to hide,
cause I am brave,
there's no need to hide,
my life has nothing for me,
to be ashamed of.

© 2010 Cynthia


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Good write

Posted 13 Years Ago


I liked it. You did a good job. These sorts of poems are good for the short and to the point sentences that you love to do

Posted 13 Years Ago


It is blunt and too the point. I noticed two typos. Looks like the same sort that I make lol
I am not hiding anythign(anything) now,

to be ashame(ashamed) of.

Posted 13 Years Ago


That's right never hide who you are. Be genuine and true to yourself always. Life is too short. There's only one special you to show to the world. The world will be a better place with you in it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very bold again !

Posted 13 Years Ago


Actually, I don't know, but I think the last line doesn't need to be there. You sound strong through the rest of it that the last line seems like you are getting defensive or trying to convince yourself. I say leave it out and re-read it and see what you think.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very good poem. No reason to hide. Need to face the world with no fear. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


A few typos/spelling mistakes - but nice work here. You have conveyed the message wonderfully. Sometimes we go within ourselves and hide who we really are, for whatever reason... So you have highlighted the importance of being youself and being true to yourself no matter what.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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'there is no need to hide,
cause I am brave,
there's no need to hide,
my life has nothing for me,
to be ashame of.
I am NOT hiding'
~what a beautifully written empowering poem~~

:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love it i Wish I can stop hiding . That's all I seem to do! (sigh)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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