Loving You

I thought loving you wasn't hard,
but I am totally wrong,
loving you is the hardest thing to do,
cause you never get apperciate,
by the love and care I always give you.

I thought loving you is easy,
but I am wrong again,
you never get serious,
on how much I love I pay,
in order to get your attention.

Loving you is never easy,
but I can't help,
to love you even more

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Rain Kissed Secret]

I want you to look at this and fix all the errors, make sure it's grammatically correct. And then I want you to read it and imagine this place.. and then I want you to re write it till it's stuck in your head and you can't do anything but live in it. Then I want you to re write again what you have in your mind and don't leave anything out. If you do that, I would love to hear what happens :)

[HereWithoutYou<3]

I think, this poem reflects on the saying " You don't know a good thing until it's gone." It's an awesome poem, you write with such power on the simple word of love. The many possibilities that can happen while being in love, or just as simple of just loving someone. Your a great writer, and hope you keep writing, they're might be critics on the way but you'll get through them. :)

[Sukriti Suki]

you are 11 years old!!! and you write so well!!! this is amazing stuff!

[Dalebear]

This is a very good poem

[Coyote Poetry]

Love is a precious gift. It should be given to someone who deserve your love. A very strong poem. Love can twist-up a wise mind. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Norma M Sutton]

It is a good poem. Check the next to the last lines in the first two stanza's. I'm not clear on what affect you are trying to get with those and found them confusing.

[Marie Harrison]

Isn't that true of love so often, one person gives more than another often. But that seems to provoke even stronger displays of love and affection from the generous giver. Love is a mysterious thing. Great poem.

[Kimberly]

I love this one. Please correct some of the grammar so that it's easier to read. Otherwise, this is great. Again the idea of 'paying' your love and attention is great. You have to give and take and sometimes you feel like you're just giving, paying and paying. I like this.

[Loner]

A true picture of a helpless lover yet falling in love with him/her lover more and more . Beautifully portrayed!

[Undying Glory]

this was very good work, i just love seeing your work get better and better. this was really sweet.
"Loving you is never easy,
but I can't help,
to love you even more"
now everyone would agree that is the meaning, or at least one of the signs of true love. superb