I am Wrong

You love me,
You always do,
no,
I am wrong,
you never love me,
you are using me,
time doesn't change anything.

Now We are both in danger
mistaken love,
never going to be real,
this is the image
you have given  me,
of your fake smile,
of your fakeness.

Don't lie anymore,
I know I am wrong,
you never loved me.

Author's Note

Tell me what do you think, I think this flows bad, I am still figuring a way to solve this problem.

Reviews

[.]

this poem flows fine-but the love mentioned throughout
seems the turmoil of the piece-hopefully all will work out :)

:)

[MiidniightSoul]

It's a touching and beautiful poem. It has a deep meaning and I hope that his love isn't a lie. It just needs a little tuning. :)

[Linear]

Love maybe should read loved in the last line.

but i liked this poem, of doubt, i hope its not fake and he really loves you, I just love a happy ending

[Mauricio Montoya]

You always have your first draft. Needs some fining tuning just fill in the gaps? Only you know what massage you’re trying to convey. What I do is once I’ve got a topic then I break it in to parts for example; (past, present, futures.)- (yesterday, today, tomorrow). Get my drift. There many directions you can go with the words you choose. Poetry is an equation of words and that’s what make it fun I hope this helps.