You Change me

I used to be grumpy
you've changed me
I used to be annoying
you've changed me.

For so many years,
you've changed me so many
cause of your care
most of all,
the love you gave for me.

I try to do everything ,
for you to love me,
you changed me alot,
all by your love on me,
you love is magical,
I love you,
how you changed me,
how you love me.

Author's Note

It's a bit of an annoying peice of writing, but I feel like writing something like this now, hope you will telll me what do you think.

Reviews

[Dalebear]

That a lovely poem love is the most magical feeling and everyone deserves to be loved.

Good write

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. Love should make us content and hold on to great hope and dreams. A very good poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Kimberly]

I love the emotion here. Sometimes, for love, we change. Sometimes that can be for good and sometimes that can be destructive.

[Mauricio Montoya]

It’s great to see change for the better when it involves two people.
Nice work

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Love is truly magical, if experienced truly by a true person bestowed by a true lover..!!

Good piece..!!

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well it's good when someone helps us to become someone better..nice job

[Undying Glory]

no is isn't annoying at all, this is great work. how amazing it is to have someone special like here, who can change you from bad to good, and pull you back from the edge of the abyss. you are truly lucky to have someone like that. great

[Loner]

Honestly speaking !
its a masterpiece , beautiful expression a great write.

[sarah]

this is so wonderful honest and moving great work!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Very honest poem!