Your Words

Your Words
Cheer me up
I am screaming
cause of your words

Your Words
Stamp me
like a knife
your sharp words
twist my heart to pain

Your Words
comes out
without a think
do you notive this hurts?
Even sometimes it cheers
do you notice
what have you say?

Your Words
can be hard
can be easy

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Lilly]

Definitely a poem with some strong emotion... The second stanza is effective.
I think you should look over the third stanza though, I think the wording could be altered
slightly to make it flow better... But maybe that's just me...
Nice work