Teasing

Yet you are still teasing me
full of happiness
watching me twist in pain,
watching tears rolling,
now I am crying,
do you have enough?

Yet you are still teasing,
not even bit of guilty,
still pointing into my face
laughing so hard
others are coming
laughing with you.

Why are you still teasing?
Do you know how sad I am?
Whya re you still teasing?
Don't you see how lost I am?
Why do you need to tease me?

Author's Note

I truly disagree with teasing. What do you think about the poem? I hope you will like it.

Reviews

[Dalebear]

Their is teasing where it abit of fun and their teasing to make the other person feel lower of them selves, it horrible when it happens. I have always been told by a teacher ( a joke is when the other person finds it funny). I always remember that

Good write

Dalebear

[Alicia™]

Aww, this is horrible. I don't mind being teased once in a while if I know it's just out of fun, but this is too much.

[Coyote Poetry]

Ain't funny to be tease. People need to have common sense. Always time for good humor. Not for negative. A strong poem making a common sense point.
Coyote

[Kimberly]

I love this poem and the message that it conveys is perfect. Wonderful write.

[Undying Glory]

yes you've written a great one here, loved this. i took 6 years of bad teasing before i finally toughened up and they stopped.
"Why are you still teasing?
Do you know how sad I am?
Whya re you still teasing?
Don't you see how lost I am?
Why do you need to tease me?"
just love those words as I know exactly how it feels. great job

[hannajade]

ahh, when i was younger my brothers teased me so much..lol:(. you just have learn to ignore it:)

[Marie Harrison]

Teasing can be fun if your flirting but not malicious teasing. Not nice to do that.

[sarah]

I hate teasing too it's terrible! no one deserves it a lot of truth is in this write and it is so powerful great work!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

teasing is a horrible thing.... i went through it when i was little just like so many others. but sometimes it can scar you and your perspective on yourself for life.

[Jami Nicole]

I agree, teasing is horrible. There's a very fine line between friendly teasing and teasing for the "fun" of it. Very well written. I like it. :)