If it's Not You

If it's not you
I am dead
If it's not you
I might me vanish
If it's not you
I am not the one now

You get me out of pain
You get me out of Sadness
If it's not You
Who am I?

Author's Note

This is for my Best friend, I know this poem might not be so positive. However, that's what she does, she 'safe' me.
What do you thinK?

Reviews

[HereWithoutYou<3]

This poem makes me think of my Best Friend Valerie. She has helped me with sooo much. But I'm moving soon, and I am going to miss her like crazy.

[Kimberly]

Good poem. I like it.

[hannajade]

Nice poem! It gets you thinking, thats for sure:)
I don't think that some of the words you have at the end should have capital letters at the beggining. e.g. Sadness should be sadness, You should be you. just a suggestion,

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Questioning about life's most precious gift is kind of putting a mark on oneself.. I just liked each word..Seems so true, so applicable..!!!

Great Job..!!!

[Rain Kissed Secret]

Its hard to follow.. somewhat. I mean, I get it, but it took a bit. Ya know? Anyway, I'm very glad you decided to dedicate this to your friend. ^^
Rain

[HopelesslyDevoted]

what a sweet poem for your best friend.

[sarah]

this is a wonderful picture of friendship! wonderful job

[Coyote Poetry]

We question life, friendship and love. Hard to know who we are. Human nature is a constant change. I like the poem. Life is a roller coaster ride. We can many people in a day. A excellent poem. Made me think.
Coyote

[Marie Harrison]

This poem can be read many different ways and can apply to many different people. That's the beauty of your poem here. Fabulous write. I love it!