Guess It's Another Day

This Night Is Over
Pain is still here

The Night Is Over
Lonely me is Here

The Night Is Over
Everything Is Still The Same

The Night Is Over
Left Me Plain

Night Is Over
I Guess This Is Just Another Day

I Guess This Is Another Day
Other Day Of Sad
Other Day Of Lonely
Other Day Of Me

Author's Note

What do u think?

Reviews

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oh thats a sad poem! I am sure that we have all felt this way before, waking up hoping that things have resolved themselves..nice job

[Coyote Poetry]

Not a positive poem. A lot of sadness and hopelessness in the words. I like the flow and the ending. A very good poem for being sad.
Coyote

[HopelesslyDevoted]

interesting, most people look at another day as something positive. a chance to start over and create a better experience than the day before. but i do understand this feeling. i have had the same one before when things weren't quite going right in my life. it isn't always bad though trust me, eventually good will come out of whatever it is that you are going through.

[My Fair Lady]

Nice descriptive lonliness at its core.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Great job! :]

[Sweets]

Beautiful use of parallelism :)
Great job!
-Sweets