Guess It's Another Day

This Night Is Over
Pain is still here

The Night Is Over
Lonely me is Here

The Night Is Over
Everything Is Still The Same

The Night Is Over
Left Me Plain

Night Is Over
I Guess This Is Just Another Day

I Guess This Is Another Day
Other Day Of Sad
Other Day Of Lonely
Other Day Of Me

Author's Note

What do u think?

Reviews

[Siddhartha]

simple.straight. and spot on...

[Fontane Wong]

I like it. It can really tell the sad to the people of their lives. Although it's a sad poem, it can tell the truth within these simple words. It's a really great poem for sad.

[HereWithoutYou<3]

I really like it. Truly that's what some people say about everyday of their lives. That they don't do anything. That they can't change. I really like how you put words together. The flow of the words, this is really good.

[Kimberly]

This is good. Simple and clean.

[Dalebear]

Good write

Dalebear

[Short.Nerd]

Pretty good

[Rain Kissed Secret]

Not my style, but not a bad style. Other people will love this, even if I don't :)
Rain

[Marie Harrison]

Oh...this makes me sad. You are too special to be sad and lonely. But I love your poem. I love the system of subtle repetition.

[sarah]

such a sad poem but holds deep truth within it's words. Great job!

[Revolved]

Sad poem, true poem, and it's real. I love it and it totally fits when I'm down. Great rhymes and it's not only just a sad poem, it's entertaining as well.