Do you Care?

Do you care of me?
Stop ignoring me!
It makes me so hurt,
why do you do this?
Am I really the One?
The One you love,
the one you care?

Author's Note

What do you think?
I need to admit a thing, this poem is fake, that i not happening to me, so I hope you can give me some honnest review, I need to improve this!
I suck, I know I do.

Reviews

[Norma M Sutton]

It reads a little different then I'm accustomed to, but the point comes across loud and clear.

[Marie Harrison]

Well if it's not true, you don't have to tell the reader. I mean most poets don't have the opportunity to intrepret their poems to their readers. I read your poem without reading the authors notes and thought it had a lot of feeling in it. If this hasn't happened to you, it must have happened to someone you care about because your poem still provokes feeling from the reader.

[sarah]

Well it is great but poems are always better when coming from the heart, from a personal experience