Do You Love Me?

Do You Love me

Do you love me?
I don't think you're sure
it seems you love me
but only as a friend
how much you love me?
How deep you love me?
Why there's no answer
do you hate to hurt me
by telling me the truth?
Do you love me?

Author's Note

That's very fake, I know, but what do u think???

Reviews

[Short.Nerd]

Very strong feelings. Great job capturing that!

[Kimberly]

Very nice poem but it does need something. It sounds, and don't take this the wrong way, but it sounds a little forced at the moment, almost desperate. I know that that's kind of the point, but I'd like it to be less obvious maybe. The emotion is clearly there, though, and that's great.

[Coyote Poetry]

The question of love will come often in your life. Sometime better to say nothing then lie. A very strong poem. Love make us kings of the world. And can take us to hell. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[ForTheWorld]

strong!!! the feeling is too strong, the pain. I love it, sometimes love do hurt someone... =D

[Rain Kissed Secret]

Hint: Don't put the title twice on the actual writing portion. It gets very repetitive and we tend to focus on what bothers us than the great potential of your writing. Mkay?

This one is a LOT more clear than some of your others in my opinion, I love how it has a baseline, but I think this is more of a pre-write than an actual thing. You have great potential sweety.. You just have to learn to love what you write and go with it. Write about what you have a lot to say about, that's my challenge for you :) I don't get to hear your opinions with these. I want to hear what that is through your writing.
Thanks for sharin'!
~Rain

[NickyGL]

its good, short, and not much of a flow.... but good meaning

[Dalebear]

This is very touching poem good write

[lavina k.]

Actually according to me its not fake, these words are just merely not words....it described the heartfelt feeling of a girl when she wanted to hear something from a guy but he doesn't speak anything, these questions arises in her mind that time....
well nice one but its not fake!!!

[Marie Harrison]

Interesting questions to ponder about. Lovely.

[sarah]

awwwww! this tottaly brought out how I feel about this guy! wow this is amazing! really touching I loved it, it expressed soooo much