Bye Bye

Bye Bye

It's A Start
Everything Has End
Your Sadness
Your Fear
It's A New Start
Everything Has Change
Bye

Author's Note

What do you think? Tell me!

Reviews

[Dalebear]

I like it and things do change.

[ForTheWorld]

i love this, yeah everything will change!!!

[No regret]

this is nice

[Roxi L]

I like it. And endings are beginnings

Never
Writing keeps the dream alive

[Kimberly]

I like this. I like that you're dealing with pairs of opposites: beginnings and endings.

[Rain Kissed Secret]

I think you need to add things to this, I'm not sure what, but have fun figuring it out :) Good luck
~Rain

[Fontane Wong]

Just a few simple words can tell a great thing. How wonderful is that! I love how simple and easy it is, but it is very profound! Great write!

[Norma M Sutton]

I like it's simplicity. Almost childlike. Well done.

[Im His Daughter]

Everyday is a New Beginning. Everyday God wipes our slates clean. Everyday! Great write!

[sarah]

hardest thing to say in my mind goodbye can be very painful great write!