BIG LETTER POEM

For contest

Dance by the beach

Able to sing

Never cry

Ice to skate

Emotion of happiness all around

Land of Wonder is its name

Author's Note

Daniel, oh how I hate him, Jess, I hate you too!

This is for the contest Big Letter Contest.
What do you think about it?

Reviews

[No regret]

Good luck for the contest..... this is gud !!!

[Jessica]

You should write something about Daniel by using the letters, 'D A N I E L', not just writing a poem. Anyway, a good job.

To his ex- girlfriend

[Cynthia]

OK, guys, Daniel IS NOT my boyfriend or ex-boyfriend!
It's justa joke play by Jessica, that odious girl!

[M.A. Van Dyke]

This is a nice piece, the only qualm I have with it is that the text of the poem does not fit with your stated dislike of this Daniel fellow... lol, maybe make the "I" stand for idiot...

[Lawrence Taylor]

I don't get it. I agree with Kristen Wallen, there's something missing.

[Roxi L]

Good but if you hate him then why are they good things...also dont hate people...your gonna miss them in the end...just like I miss my EX boyfriend
Roxi

[SimplyDisastrous]

It definitely has potential, I'll give you that much, but I feel like there's something missing. But all in all, it's not so bad a poem. Keep working on it and you'll do just fine. (:

[nono]

Oh I remember when the teachers made us do this in class. I love how you did it and the words are beautiful for when you do this your not always free to put them into words. Nicely done, because I know on some letters it can be really hard.

[Wondering Mind]

A nice Acrostic. Good luck with the contest.May I suggest that you add the s for "its name"?