Be a Bird

Be a bird
fly for freedom
fly around
search for truth
watch out the window
you might find lots of things
flying
who are free
imagine you are one of them
to enjoy
to feel
what they feel too

Be a bird
fly up the sky
feel freedom
touch the sky.

Author's Note

What do you think??

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

How lovely it is to be able to fly, but you say more with this write; a call to free the mind into the vast land of Imagination...Imagine! Thanks for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

To be able to fly away and be free. A dream for the most of us. I like the desire and the wish in the poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[SilentDreamer]

Sometimes I wish I could be a bird. What simple worries they have. What simple thoughts and cares. I like this, it flows well and has good descriptions. I really like it.

[Kseniya]

This poem has the feel of a haiku mixed with an ee cummings poem. The positioning of the breaks make the poem feel like a leaf on the wind swaying sideways... and then suddenly down! But then swiftly again... It captures the swooping motion of flying, or gliding, and I think that works very much in favor to the "wholeness" quality of the poem.

[Rhonda]

awesome write :)

[Sweets]

It reminds me of the hot summer air.
Great poem :D

[Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin]

I love the last part if you really want to know what I think. It delivers a sense of finality and it also delivers a sense of longing to be a bird, because really we humans just need to fly up in the sky, feel the freedom there and really really touch the sky. Life long dream of all of mankind is to fly like a bird...
Great job! this was really sweet, simple and wonderfully thought out.
-Yin

[Michael X]

this poem reminded me of why I enjoy reading, it takes the reader to another
place and time and questions belief, this is vivid ponder.
written to the backdrop of a sky and soul in flight, which in subtle ways
reminds me of a celestial perspective, awsome job on this, a 100

[Miss Coral]

I think that this was really cute, but it was pretty repetitive too. Maybe change some of the things to make it more substantial?
Overall though, great job. :)

-Coral-

[Trevor]

I love it !