Be a Bird

Be a bird
fly for freedom
fly around
search for truth
watch out the window
you might find lots of things
flying
who are free
imagine you are one of them
to enjoy
to feel
what they feel too

Be a bird
fly up the sky
feel freedom
touch the sky.

Author's Note

What do you think??

Reviews

[YYPSNicoletse]

Free as a bird and fly up high to reach the sky.

[Voice]

I have always said in my next life I would like to be a bird. Great write!!! :)

Voice

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

You couldn't have expressed freedom in a more eternal,pristine and complete way.

[Dalebear]

I like it, how free you can if you are a bird

[India Brooks]

love

[Kimberly]

Very nice.

[No regret]

beautiful thought !! n well told . great!!

[Marie Harrison]

Beautiful! Now I'd like to fly like a bird or feel what they feel. Oh the elation and zeal that would bring to my heart.90

[James Paulin]

I like the concept and theme. The idea of incorporating the qualities of birds into lifestyle can be stimulating. I prefer the allure of subliminal suggestion to obvious recommendation though. I think more elaboration and elevation is worth consideration. I love potent poems that set minds spinning with just the right tantalization concisely packed; difficult but worth agonizing over.

[ForTheWorld]

touch the impossible, learn to fly, free our soul into the highest clouds in the sky....beautifully written, a jewel