Be a Bird

Be a bird
fly for freedom
fly around
search for truth
watch out the window
you might find lots of things
flying
who are free
imagine you are one of them
to enjoy
to feel
what they feel too

Be a bird
fly up the sky
feel freedom
touch the sky.

Author's Note

What do you think??

Reviews

[Rose Tyler]

Be a bird, and fly away to freedom. That's what some wish, and that wish is granted.
Good write

[Fontane Wong]

I love this freedom is what we want! How a bird is free! Reading this poem let me feel that I'm a bird, flying freely in the sky. I can almost see it! What a charming poem! I love it!!! Thanks for posing such a simple but great poem!

[Danielle Asher]

simple and yet strong. thank you!

[AleeleeElaine]

It's very positive, I enjoyed it

[Norma M Sutton]

I love the imagery. I had the honor of watch a family trio of hawks soar over the field here yesterday. They are such beautiful creatures.

[sarah]

I love this the feeling of freedom is somthing everyone wants! I would be one of them

[NecroNinja91]

Honestly, hon ....

I love it :D
It's very uplifting ..

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I would love to be a bird. Nice flow. charming poem

[Freeman]

Nice flow and beautiful imagery.

[Aven]

I think this poem is written very freely, just like the bird. :)