Writings World

Here's the ocean

full of emotion

with sadness

hopeless

anger like thunder

happiness with wonder

how wonderful

how beautiful

can this ocean be

you might find me

swimming around

with poems surround

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

short & sweet one...i really liked it:)

[~Lizzy♬]

Love it! ;)

[Short.Nerd]

Nice Job

[Angelauthor1204]

nicely done.

[Black Cat Fever]

I think there's a lot of emotion swirling around in this piece. I like the format of this, think you did a wonderful job on expressing yourself in this.

[SimplyDisastrous]

This poem is so beautiful, Cynthia! Very beautiful indeed. Also, the rhyme scheme is wonderful! Excellent job on this one. (:

[Moonflower]

Lovely~

[Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin]

Wow, the flow in it was excellent, brought about some calming and soothing effect. This was just plain beauty for me. The turbulence of the ocean being converted to calm happiness. Great job.
-Yin