Writings World

Here's the ocean

full of emotion

with sadness

hopeless

anger like thunder

happiness with wonder

how wonderful

how beautiful

can this ocean be

you might find me

swimming around

with poems surround

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[.]

the ocean is as vast as our imaginations..nicely done

[YYPSNicoletse]

Good poem!

[Aven]

I found a very classic beauty in this. well written. :)

[Dalebear]

The ocean is full of emotions to, I like it
Keep writing

Dalebear

[Kimberly]

I like that you are connecting the ocean with emotion and the depth of each.

[qaralynn]

nice poem..like it

[thatbryngirl]

so soothing, oh i lovee it. so beautiful...

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes the ocean was my motivator for 6 years. 3 years on both coastlines. I like the feel and emotion in your words. I like the poem. A very logical ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Rain Kissed Secret]

Last two lines seems somewhat forced. Other than that, I think it worked well.

[Sweets]

Short and wonderful.
I loved it (: