Open Your Eyes

Let's pull things aside

and open your eyes wide

can't you see

you set my love free

fly to your heart

that's the love of art

love is magical

also musical

music of happiness

don't show your sadness

so just smile

even distance between is miles

please be lover of me

as you can be

Author's Note

My first rhyem poem, it may sound strange.
Please review!

Reviews

[M.A. Van Dyke]

This is my favorite of yours that I can remember! Good job! My only critique is the penultimate (I love that word!) line, maybe change it to "be a lover to me" or something... I don't know, it's the only part that did not sing to me... :-)

[loowzerX]

awww it's really sweet! good one :)