Open Your Eyes

Let's pull things aside

and open your eyes wide

can't you see

you set my love free

fly to your heart

that's the love of art

love is magical

also musical

music of happiness

don't show your sadness

so just smile

even distance between is miles

please be lover of me

as you can be

Author's Note

My first rhyem poem, it may sound strange.
Please review!

Reviews

[YYPSNicoletse]

Great poem!

[Dalebear]

Good poem

[Rhonda]

awesome poem

[Kimberly]

There are a few errors that I'd fix in polishing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Distance mean little when the love is true. The flow and story in your words were very good. I feel the need and the kindness of a safe/secure love. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Sweets]

Nice rhyme, and beautiful poem

[Short.Nerd]

So sweet and nice! Good JOb

[Angelauthor1204]

nicely done.

[Miss Coral]

I think that this is my favorite piece of yours, though I don't like the last three lines- they don't make much sense. Other than that though, this was great. :)
Great job!

-Coral-

[Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin]

this one was sweet, and it flowed well until i read even distance between is miles, it just didn't match up to me. I think you need to work on this line, other than that it was perfect, it displayed what it was meant to be. Great job.