Cry Out All I Have

Cry Out All I Have

A Poem by Cynthia

Burst into tears

you finally tell me

you hate me

my heart twist with pain

but your love

no matter how

I can't get back anymore

I don't know what should I say

I only want to cry

to cry out

my sadness

and leave nothing

in my body

cause I know

all I have is

Pain

and

No

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© 2010 Cynthia


Author's Note

Cynthia
Is this too short???
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No the poem isn't too short, the shortness fits in, don't ask me how, I don't know, I just think so :P
The poem is filled with emotions and a very heartfelt one as well.
Great job and thanks for sharing!
~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 13 Years Ago


very good poem :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this poem so...... heartfelt and touching moving poem.

Keep up the writing


Posted 14 Years Ago


I am pro-short poetry, I write very short poems myself. stay true! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


No poem can be too short. This is good and hearfelt and heartfelt should be brief.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i liked this ,,, i came to read it again ..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Short and sweet.
Kinda sad, but nice

Posted 14 Years Ago


very nice ..tc

Posted 14 Years Ago


By "my hear twist with pain" I think you mean "My heart twisted with pain"

You should probably fix that. I can see that the people below me are very confused about that line. But, otherwise, I can relate to this poem. Alot. Good job, Cyn.As always.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nopes its more enough to describe what you are going through with all you felt..
Nice write!!!!
Keep writing!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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