Cry Out All I Have
A Poem by
Cynthia
Burst
into tears
you
finally tell me
you
hate me
my
heart twist with pain
but
your love
no
matter how
I
can't get back anymore
I
don't know what should I say
I
only want to cry
to
cry out
my
sadness
and leave nothing
in
my body
cause
I know
all
I have is
Pain
and
No
More
© 2010 Cynthia
Author's Note
Is this too short???
What do you think?
Please Review
Reviews
No the poem isn't too short, the shortness fits in, don't ask me how, I don't know, I just think so :P
The poem is filled with emotions and a very heartfelt one as well.
Great job and thanks for sharing!
~A Fallen Heroine~
Posted 13 Years Ago
very good poem :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
very good poem :)
I like this poem so...... heartfelt and touching moving poem.
Keep up the writing
Posted 14 Years Ago
I like this poem so...... heartfelt and touching moving poem.
Keep up the writing
I am pro-short poetry, I write very short poems myself. stay true! :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
I am pro-short poetry, I write very short poems myself. stay true! :)
No poem can be too short. This is good and hearfelt and heartfelt should be brief.
Posted 14 Years Ago
No poem can be too short. This is good and hearfelt and heartfelt should be brief.
i liked this ,,, i came to read it again ..
Posted 14 Years Ago
i liked this ,,, i came to read it again ..
Short and sweet.
Kinda sad, but nice
Posted 14 Years Ago
Short and sweet.
Kinda sad, but nice
very nice ..tc
Posted 14 Years Ago
very nice ..tc
By "my hear twist with pain" I think you mean "My heart twisted with pain"
You should probably fix that. I can see that the people below me are very confused about that line. But, otherwise, I can relate to this poem. Alot. Good job, Cyn.As always.
Posted 14 Years Ago
By "my hear twist with pain" I think you mean "My heart twisted with pain"
You should probably fix that. I can see that the people below me are very confused about that line. But, otherwise, I can relate to this poem. Alot. Good job, Cyn.As always.
Nopes its more enough to describe what you are going through with all you felt..
Nice write!!!!
Keep writing!!!!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Nopes its more enough to describe what you are going through with all you felt..
Nice write!!!!
Keep writing!!!!
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Added on August 31, 2010
Last Updated on September 14, 2010
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Cynthia Hong Kong
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