Love of Tea

My Love Like Tea

I poured it out

into your cup

to fill your heart

with love

and love you forever

Author's Note

What do you think????
Do you think it's emotional enough? Cause for myself I hardly feel anything from this poem.. So, tell me what do you think.... Maybe I should delete it... Should I?

Reviews

[M.A. Van Dyke]

the only thing i could say is that when i don't drink my tea quick enough, it gets cold...
i like what you have so far, but it seems unfinished. that is not a bad thing, it just leaves me wanting more. your idea is there, your talent is there, i just want to see where it goes from there!

[Coyote Poetry]

In so few words you create a beautiful poem. The gift of love should be slow and easy like drinking a cup of hot tea. I like the complete poem. A perfect ending to a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[~Lizzy♬]

It's not really emotinal enough. Maybe a little bit more imagery but, I like the way you said that you poured your love into his.

;)

[Jessica]

Good job! Cynthia. I think that ......you can have a little more emotion, it will make the poem more ....um..... you know what that I am meaning.(I hope so.)
KIU!!

Jessie.

[Miss Coral]

I love this image.. and with some work on this poem, I think that it could be excellent. As is, I don't think it needs more, but needs a few changes. Nice job though. c:

-Coral-

[Short.Nerd]

Good Job

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Ofcourse not! That's a simple yet lovely poem!

[SimplyDisastrous]

Short but very sweet. Just the way I like it. Good job but...it needs a little bit more work. There definitely isn't enough words to evict an emotion from this piece, It has potential, though, so you're halfway there. (: