Need you, Love you

I want to die,

but I fear,

I want to live,

I scar.

I don't know what to do,

I can't die,

can't live,

now,

the only chance is,

to find someone,

to help me,

either to live,

or to die.

So,

now I am finding a person,

which can I can trust,

which he will care,

about me,

but I just can't,

find the right person.

So,

are you the one?

Who can give me love,

and,

care?

Please tell me,

if you can,

I will wait for you.

I can't sleep,

I can't eat,

I just want to find the right person,

one day,

if you come,

I will smile,

I will never cry again,

because I can find you.

Now,

nothing makes me smile,

I am sick of waiting for you,

when will you come?

I asked you long time ago,

I can't live,

but I can't die too.

If I don't know,

there will be a person,

like you

I probably turn crazy,

but I know,

you exist,

so I can wait.

Don't you know,

I'm waiting for you?

Please,

come here,

and you may heal me,

care me,

please,

come.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[YYPSNicoletse]

Bravo!

[Dalebear]

This is nice and moving poem

Keep Writing

Dalebear

[Kimberly]

Very moving.

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. In life we must stand alone and allow the world to teach us we have value. A very sad poem. To be alone and to have the desire to be loved and care for. It is a hard place to be. I learn when we don't give a damn. Good things will come. Desperation scare people to death. We always want what we can't have. A powerful poem. Love is one part of life. Ain't easy to always find peace in a life.
Coyote

[Rain Kissed Secret]

I suggest going in and making it longer, it doesn't fit right when it's short. Honestly, it is okay to change things. One worded poems are good, but it has to have a sharp emotion behind it. Desire isn't sharp. Its calm, and always there. Does that make sense? Anger, that would be the best emotion to put behind those kinds of poems. Try it, kay? Keep it up

[Sara Mercury]

So many poems have been written about this very thing. We all are waiting for that certain person who we think will be our answer to happiness, when in truth, no one can truly make us happy. Happiness is totally dependent upon ourselves. How can we depend upon someone else to do something that they cannot do? Meet the right guy, and all will fall into place for a while - but then, when that person fails you ever so slightly (as humans so often tend to do), you will be unhappy once again.

Search for a man because you want to share the joys of your life with them. If you feel a void in your life when you meet that significant other, you will not have anything to offer them, will you? You will only drain their life from them.

No one "needs" a lover for fulfillment; we only need ourselves. We need communion with others, yes; but this need can be fulfilled with friends, family, etc. We do not need a lover to fulfill this need. Anything else is a want and a falsehood. But how much like a "need" that particular want seems, yes?

We all have a significant other, even if they don't exist in the physical realm. All we have to do is learn to accept and love ourselves unconditionally, and we will feel that never ending love being given freely back to us. It's that simple, really.

[the_stoic]

it might seem harsh but the only person who can help you is you youself . consider yourself awesomely lucky if you find a person who considers you to be as important as himself . but such people are rare and more often than not we end giving the key to our happiness to loved ones who carelessly lose them .. then misery awaits forever . so be cautious . sorry for this sermon like speech dear friend . just felt like saying this cause of the tender age of yours. keep writing

[Black_Rabbit]

A very intresting poem, kind of creepy though, :).
There's a bit grammar mistakes but overall its a great poem.

[Angelauthor1204]

Lovely.

[josie]

wow thats amazing!