Hate you

You Laugh,

I cry,

You cry,

I laugh,

You come,

I go,

you go,

I come.

I won't listen to you,

never ever,

so,

go away!

I want to roar,

scream,

at you,

but you never go away,

you just stay,

stay at where are you.

You low your head,

say nothing,

I don't want you,

beside me,

I hate you,

I dislike you.

why?

You still,

stand,

sit,

besides me,

I hate you even more,

I don't want to see you anymore.

Just go,

run,

away,

as far as you can,

but you said,

no.

Oh,

I hate you so much!

I cried as you come,

I kept blaming you,

also angry of myself,

I don't know why,

I want you to go,

as I see you.

Please,

go away,

otherwise,

my heart,

will be hurt,

so,

can't you,

go away?

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Reviews

[Sara Mercury]

I love you; I hate you. I love you; I'll kill you - it's all the same, really. This poem definitely puts over the concept of loving someone so much that you hate them. You hate them ... and why? Cos at some point, they've hurt you and you don't want to love them anymore. So instead of laying blame where it truly lies (with self), we push that hatred off onto the object of our love. This just proves once again that love just bloody kills!

[YYPSNicoletse]

This is a very GREAT poem! I like the title 'Hate You'.

[Dalebear]

Nicely written poem

Dalebear

[Kimberly]

I like this one. It's contradictory, just like the heart.

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes when it over and we need to be separated from someone. They must go. I like the feel and the emotion in the words. A soft anger but a desire to be left alone and in peace to be able to think. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Rain Kissed Secret]

I really see this as what love is. Its a game of Cat and Mouse, and you have to choose which one you are. Either one can win, you just have to know which part you play best. I think I would rather see you do stories, because you have great ideas, I just can't get into your poems. Try remembering that there are such things as long poems. Close your eyes, think, and let the words come to you. Hope it helps. Keep it up

[Jessica]

I love you; I hate you. it's all the same. This poem puts over the concept of you lovin somebody so much that you are startin to hate them.and later you'll be loathing them. You know, love always brings in hate and then the"hate" will soon turn to kill. It always happens.Many people were dead because of "hateness"(Should it be?)but what is the meaning of dying because of loving?
why it will become like this? You need to ask yourself about that.(If you're thinking to die because of love.)
You did a fine job on this piece of poem.the expression is very strong. but may I ask you who are you thinking of when you are writing this sad poem?

[Sweets]

Nice poem, But the mood's kinda sad =/

[Angelauthor1204]

It's definitely a good read. I'm not a poetic person so I may not be able to review very well.

[Anas]

it made a good read. Keep it up :)