Treasured Love

Treasuring your love,

cause me upset,

nervous,

that,

you don't love me,

I love you,

I did not treasure my love,

so,

how about you?

Treasure your love again?

Okay,

here's the deal,

what do you want?

So you will love me,

not treasure it anymore,

tell me,

so I will give you.

Please,

tell me,

I really need you,

want you,

please,

don't you know?

I pray for you,

every night and day,

for your love,

care.

Love,

darling,

sweet,

I used so many words,

to describe you,

to tell you,

I love you.

Please,

don't,

treasure your love anymore,

how many times,

do I need to tell you,

I love you?

Every time,

I see you,

I wish,

for your love,

so when?

Please,

say,

'I love you'.

Author's Note

Please ignore grammer mstake, cause I'm still working on the grammer.
Thanks if you write a revew!

Reviews

[YYPSNicoletse]

Good poem! Cynthia

[Dalebear]

This is a very good poem lovely to

Dalebear

[Kimberly]

This is good.

[Coyote Poetry]

When love overtake us. We can go crazy with happiness. I like the desperation and great emotion of love in your words. It is Ok for us to be crazy in love. Few times is the feeling alive in us. A outstanding poem. I like the flow and the emotion.
Coyote

[Sara Mercury]

This sounds like the words of so many men in my life. They want me, but I SOOOOO don't want them at all. Why doesn't anyone want to give up already? Why torture yourself and blame me? This statement, of course, comes from the other end of this poem's standpoint. If you are in such a situation, give up the fight; you will never win. Love isn't a conquest or even a contest where you win or lose, really, cos at the end of the day, love is either there, or it's not. There you have it.

[BELLA]

love it

[Angelauthor1204]

nice.