Misunderstand Love

I looked at him,
my eyes filled with love,
if he loves me,
but still ,
I will love him,
as long as he exists

No matter what,
or even if he has his lover,
I love him through my heart,
will he understand?
I asked myself,
I am not sure,
does he love me as a friend,
or a lover,
however,
I love him.

He is charming,
clever,
tall,
even if he's not,
still,
I love him.

I can give him everything,
everything I own,
or even myself,
as long he knows I exis,

I love this world.

I was born,
to love him,
to care for him,
more than his mom,
dad,
parents.

Will he know my love?
Will he understand me?
Oh,
my lover,
I love you.

Author's Note

I think this one is pretty weird, really, please tell me if it do.
Thanks if you write a review!

Reviews

[Dalebear]

Sometimes it not just true love but there is someone that is true out there for everyone.

Good Write, Well done

Dalebear

[Kimberly]

Good. Keep writing.

[Rain Kissed Secret]

I feel this as an obsession. A stalker peering into the window of her targets house watching as he has a particularly happy moment with his Mamma and Papa. A stalker that has no logic, and no will of thought other than "You are mine, or I will make you be, no matter what." Keep it up

[Sara Mercury]

It's a poem for your twinflame! This is the kind of love this poem is describing here, I feel. Either that, or it's an obsession. There is a difference. "I was born to love you" - I have heard these words before somewhere - and it's a direct statement to a true soul mate (twinflame); that person we each are connected to, who is our opposite in gender. (Gender is the wrong word; it's more like the electric or magnetic charge).

"As long as he knows I exist" - I love this part. Here's a secret: he knows you exist, if only on the higher planes. His physical and/or etheric mind may not know you exist, but his higher, more spiritual mind will always know who you are.

One of the most fascinating things about the human race is that we all have it in common to long for that one special someone who we think will complete us. This is our twinflame - and this is why we so often write poems like this one!

"He is charming, clever, tall, even if he's not, still, I love him." This suggests that this person's appearance is not set in stone; hence the reason why I believe this poem to be about someone's twinflame, and not someone who is known in the physical realm.

"Will he know? Will he understand me?" lol - Would that they all understood us! :)

[Short.Nerd]

Great Job

[literarygirl37]

There is something here, that's for sure. I like the emotion behind it. It's a bit confusing, though. You can tell it comes from the heart, but I think it could use a bit of editing.

[josie]

wow that was amazing kinda made me think of my past.... good job!:) lol

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Line 4 IF he loves me
Line 6 I will love him
as long as he exists.
LINE 9 Or even IF he...
Line 14 DOES he...
Line 21 een IF he's not
Line 27 As long as he knowS ...
LIne 29 I WAS born
LIne 31 To care FOR him
LOVED THE FEELING YOU PUT IN

[Coyote Poetry]

Only part that confuse me was he had a lover. Otherwise poem is beautiful and filled with love and great desire. I like the hope and love in the last lines. A very good poem.
Coyote

[DrSprinkz73]

I think this is very cute a few grammatical mistakes that could be easily fixed but nonetheless I liked it you're showing great promise as a poetic writer :)