Mom, I love you

I awoke,
there's the face,
I know,
my mom.

My forehead is hot,
my mom's tears drop,
on my cheeks,
my heart was touched,
I felt sorry,
sorry for being a bad daughter.

I hardly stay at home,
I rather stay at the street,
but now,
I regret,
I can tell,
my mom care,
and she look after me.

Mom smiled at she saw me,
awake,
I cry,
I kept saying,
sorry,
she shook,
she said it's okay,
I cry even more.

I don't know how my mom feel,
she cares  me much,
but I don't think as she think,
I hate myself.

I know I need to be good,
to care my mom,
to look after her,
I know I can do it,
I smile

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Nancy S.]

heartfelt expression of love and consideration. Every child feels this way at one time of another. well done.

[vincentbals]

Nice poem. Very deep ...

[SansFree]

I like it :D. reminds me of myself...thank you. I will go see my mother today.

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with the answers in your words. Sometime we must think and do the right things. I lost three brothers that were very young. Their poor mother don't talk of them for the sadness that would be create. Youth mean freedom and no control for kids. Fear and worry for the parent. Just be kind. I always say. Put yourself in their shoes and see how they feel. A powerful poem. No-one is perfect. We must do our best.
Coyote

[DamienHino]

aww well this is a heartfelt poem I know the relationship with your mother is very important and as you grow older you start to stray, and she will always be your mother no matter what. I totally related to this poem good read. One suggestion is to read it over, there is a few grammar mistakes but I understood it =D