Son

That's my first poem about this kind of topic, I mean the love between parents and their kids.

You are my angel,
my darling,
my sweetheart,
son,
I love you so much.
I love you more than myself.

Oh Son,
You have my blood inside you,
I love you too much,
to punish you,
why do you leave me?

Son,
you went away from your home,
when will you come back?
I fear you won't,
please,
come back son.

I thought of you,
day and night,
my heart is in pain,
son,
have you ever think of me?

Son,
I want to see you,
and to tell you, I love you.

Author's Note

That's my first poem that talks about a mom and son, so please review to tell me what do you think!

Reviews

[Moonflower]

This is a beautiful, touching piece. It flows quietly, but smoothly. I can relate to this poem well, good job, thanks for sharing, dear. :)

[Nancy S.]

Palpable read, Cynthia. It colors the page with such love and the ache of a troubled relationship. My takes is that the son has left home, either moved as an adult or run away as a child, and completely cut off the Mother from his life. That was a tough subject for a first write, but you handled it well.

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. A mother and son are very close. Any child born from a woman becomes a lifetime worry. A beautiful poem of love and care. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Undying Glory]

this was incredibly sweet and touching. kind of reminds me of my own parents, and all the hurt i've caused them. awesome topic you chose. sometimes it amazes me how my parents can stand me, when i realise that i myself wouldn't be able to stand myself at times. wonderful, and you'd better write more of these!