Waiting

A bottle float by,
message in a bottle,
I sigh,
not for myself,
but for the one,
who write this message.

How long have he wait?
Still, he wait,
wait for a reply,
like me.

Life ask us to wait,
I wait too,
wait for her,
my lover,
to come back,
into my arms.

She said she'll come back,
but when?
She said ' two years'
Now, four years went by,
I need to wait.

I do feel hopeless,
I just hope ,
she will come.

I wait for that day,
as your shadow come,
and your smile come,
when?
Life didn't answer me,
so I wait.

Wait and wait,
the longer I wait,
the more hopeless I'm,
I search for you,
even I hear your name,
my heart bit fast.

I search,
I wait.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Dalebear]

This is a good write

[Kimberly]

This is good.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good poem. I like it too. It gets irritating when you have to wait forever. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Short.Nerd]

Good Job!

[DrSprinkz73]

WONDERFUL!!!! I adore it! This is a very relate-able piece and I like how you go back and forth with the "characters" so to speak in your poem. :)

[Angelauthor1204]

TWO THUMBS UP! Your poems are as good as always!

[Nancy S.]

This was good, Cynthia. You bring the reader to your emotions nicely.

[nono]

Everyone waits for something...Only thing is. We have to decide for ourselves what it is we're waiting for. I like this a lot because it's all so true very nice descriptions

[Moonflower]

This has a serene longing that I found lovely and touching. This is a very good poem, there's a few grammar problems, but you can work through that. :) Thank you for sharing, dear.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. I could feel the yearning and desire to find what is needed. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote