Lonely Man

Well, I actually tried to make it sound sad, hope it does.

         I looked at the broken house, my eyes filled with tears. Time changed many things. Forty years ago, I lived here with joy, but now, everything changed. My parents were dead, my brothers and sisters were lost. Yes, I am old, time have already slipped away through my fingers

         This life has nothing for be to be care of, parent’s death, lost friends. Life is a rollercoaster, these years, it stays at the trough. I made up my mind, I took up the sword at the floor, and it reached my neck.

          Life is so sad and painful

Author's Note

Please Ignore Grammer Mistakes. Pease, and please write an review to let me know what you think, please!

Reviews

[Dalebear]

This was short, but good........a good write

Dalebear

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[Jessica]

Too short but contains many expression. Great Job, Cyn. K.I.U.!

[YYPSNicoletse]

It is short, but it is good! I think you can write more!

[DamienHino]

it's short I think you can convey alot more emotion and imagery in it though :)

[Tamara Moon]

Wow. That was really good. It was a sad and touching little bit about nostalgia for childhood. I feel so bad for the man.