The Unstoppable Tears

Something I felt yesterday....BTW, thanks for reading and reviewing :)

It was something I couldn't explain,

with words I could have reached,

it was an urgency which shock me  

that tears refused to hold back.

Like an unfixable tap which kept running,

like a bucket of water which got knocked over,

these tears left me clueless and wondering

how these emotions came from.

I wasn't displeased at things around,

I wasn't disturbed by worries or trouble

but I found myself incredibly in need

of crying thousands drops of tears.

I'd lost control of my emotions

it was running wild like escaped animals

I tried to capture and lock it back,

but it slipped from me once more.

The special haunted ride within myself,

with this ghostly monster's escaping.

I looked up trying to remember

the times I smiled without doubts.

Author's Note

It was what I felt yesterday...Crying for nothing yet I felt sad somehow...It hurts a lot, and thats why I wrote this...
And I know this needs a lot of polishing, so I was hoping for some suggestion... I's ok to tell me this poem is bad and it sucks, since I know it is :) But I hope you can also tell me to improve ;))

Anyways, thanks for reading and your time :DD

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

A heartfelt account that touched me, Cynthia.
I hope today holds much more contentment for you.

[Cynthia Man]

thank you for the review :) and yeah, it does, I feel a lot more happier now and thank you once again :)

[The dark story]

first of all you should be of your work.because it is sorely great and awesome ........i really like the diction and the imagery...the emotions is so strong that i can't resist reading it again and again..... the simile is just so great and touching.....every line of this poem is thought provoking......
"which shock me ".it should be "shocked me".in my humble opinion.......
i couldn't review it when i read that three days ago.and guess what..i read this poem in my dream.too:D :D
it is great...nice work!!!!!!!!!!

[Cynthia Man]

Thanks for the advice :)) I have a very big problem when writing this, but then I'm so happy to know that you like it!

[deepblue04]

oh, wow, i feel sorry for you, I hope that you feel better, this is amazing though, good job!

[Cerise]

Aww..poor thng,..what happ...happens...every human geois through it..u get so tired of evythng...sumtyms for no reasons u start crying..its normal..:)...but wonderfully written cheer up...c what crying gave u a wonderful poem..:)..

[Cynthia Man]

thanks *hugs* I feel a lot better now with writing it out.... And anyways, thank you for the review so much!:D

[Cerise]

no problem at all darlng..:D..am glad u feel bettr...:)

[Ahmad Cox]

Sometimes we need to cry to get out everything

[Cynthia Man]

yeah, we all do...

[Belinda]

Nice read, I like the flow, it isn't choppy, it is like, old fashioned, where flow wasn't much. words needed to be used. good read.

[Cynthia Man]

Thanks for the review :DD