Wings You Give Me

Something written for a Contest, and it's kinda a real story to me :)) Thanks for dropping time by.

Invisible strings tying up my limbs

restricting my movements and mind

forcing me to hug myself so tightly,

closing up the only door out.

No matter how hard I scream, still,

unable to resist the shocking force

of which bound me to myself,   

losing grip of life, of hope, like a wounded bird.

Fear conquering my heart like beast,

unable to see anything but the darkness of my future

 Living as if dead, losing meaning of life,

I stop hoping for being rescued.

 

But then you come to me

cutting off those strings with love and care,

freeing me from my bound, settling me free , 

comforting me that everything will be ok.

With love you teach me not to fear

not to escape from anything again;

With care you teach me to fight for myself,

to resist upon unfairness with courage.

You show me the magic of life, of being alive

painting my world with vivid colors,

giving me a chance to reborn

in the way I'd never imagined.

Thanks for being the person,

who cure my bruises, who give me a new life, 

and to give me feathers to fly high,

so I can stretch my wings wide, fearless. 

Author's Note

Written for a writing contest...
This is a poem I wrote to a special friend of mine

I don't really have much confident in this one actually...
But anyways , thanks for dropping time to read this, I know it's kinda longer than the usual stuff I write

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I love that you use "with love and care"...it is the care that shows you the love...in what the friend does to show you matter. This was full of great wording and brought images of you tangled in fear, a bird caught in a net, and how your friend's love took the time, and the patience, to help you escape. I love that last line! The "fearless" in it is powerful and leaves it on a victorious note...ahh, what love and care can do!

[Cynthia Man]

Thank you very much for this wonderful review! :D

[Cynthia Man]

And I agree, love and care can be very powerful!

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Yes, they can!

[quinfinn]

what a touching and wonderfully honest homage to a special friend. bravo!

[Cynthia Man]

Thank you so much for the kind review :)

[Shadow Kat]

Wow. Beautiful, the emotions flow and the length is perfect. I do believe that with this youll win. :)

[Cynthia Man]

Thanks for your review :D

[Cynthia Man]

Very beautiful sweet CM, I'm impressed of your quill, lovely work, so rich, and with a beautiful vivid technicolored view. Thank you for your skills... proud of you.

E.L.

[Cynthia Man]

Thank you for your kind review! :D
ps. You post it for two times, do you mind me deleting the other one;D?

Yes, true, my phone did this, twice, I already did it for you dear.

[Cynthia Man]

thx:) ^^

[Belinda]

GREAT read. I LOVE the lengh & flow!

[Cynthia Man]

Thanks :D~

[deepblue04]

this is good, and very wonderful!!! and the length is totally appropiate

[Cynthia Man]

Glad You like the length, haha, thanks :D

[deepblue04]

no prob

[Cerise]

wooow....its wonderful..marvellous..phenomenal..the way you described your fear..and the end it was soo sweet....lucky you to have such friend

[Cynthia Man]

Thanks for such a big encouragement! *hugs*

[Cerise]

aww./.....ur welcome hugs bak :)

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I'm more than sure u will win the contest this poem was really inspiring! 100/100 Love it! :)

[Cynthia Man]

thanks for the encouragement :)))

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you're welcome! :DDD