Buried Hope

A poem after a long time... So, literally my first poem...

Although flowers still blossom in spring,

Birds still hum to the mother nature,

I stand here, now alone in the dark

shadows swallowing my body,

sucking up the last bit of hope.

Darkness by my side I seek

for light from the dimness of my own

but nothing ever find  after all 

Light and justice had left me alone,

and all I remain, is  darkness after all .

No moon, no stars, loneliness overwhelming

as I have to bare the pain I deserve ,

but if light should ever be found again

could you tell me where you are,

as I will soon miss your warmness? 

How will the heat, those warming touch be?

I don't want to forget, and shall it light up,

the darkness within myself,

as I keep on waiting for the day,

stars twinkle up high again

Author's Note

Um, the first attempt I made , I know it sucks, I know I've a lot of grammar mistakes, but I just wanna to express my feelings

Reviews

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

I love the way you wrote this poem. Unable to see the light above because one is buried. I love also the title. The title is widely appropriate and I see that it is well thought of.

You're poem doesn't suck, for me. I like this and find it very thought provoking

Nice write and keep writing

[Cynthia Man]

Thank you for the encouragement :) It means a lot to me ;D

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Glad to help and glad it means a lot. I love helping :D Stay strong

[PokemonFan#1]

I lovez this poem so much! XD It was really great! X3

Keep it up~ ♥
=^-^=

[K.G]

:o i feel like i can relate to this. . .like. . .your all alone in a old dark well and your stuck cause no one is willing to grab your hand and to help. . . .at least thats how i feel about it. . .:3 well dont, again beautiful :3 cant wait for more

[Cynthia Man]

Thank you so much! I will post more poems here when I've a good enough poem, some of my stuff is too randomxd ~

[K.G]

ur poems? random? pshhh please XD my can be pretty random and i can prove it too haha

[K.G]

and ur wellcome

[Cynthia Man]

hahaxd Then I shall start writing now xd
anyways, a huge thank you to you :)) Your reviews are a great encouragement!

[K.G]

Awww shux ^///^ u make me blush haha :3 im glad, and i hope my poems will be a great inspiration to you too

[Cynthia Man]

It is :)) Thats why I love reading, it always makes me think more:)

[K.G]

:3 music helps me with my imagination haha :3

[Cynthia Man]

Haha, I agree :))

[K.G]

haha yay! :3

[The dark story]

come on.....it is damn great......the theme is just so touching and pure.i really ;liked it..and if this your first poem.i should say it's literally sublime......you have really portrayed the darkness in elegant manner .......your feelings are expressed so beautifully...the last two lines are rally heart touching..great work!!11111

[Cynthia Man]

Thank you for reviewing :)

[Havoc08]

Feelings never suck, the good, the bad, the light, the dark, all still part of the whole you. With hope, faith, and love one day your light will reach down to pull you up from the darkness and envelope you with it's warming glimmer! very deep descriptions which feed our hunger. Thank you!

Jimmy

[Cynthia Man]

thanks so much for the review :)

[Havoc08]

you are very welcome, thank you for sharing you, you are a very refreshing person.

[Cynthia Man]

And a very good first one Cynthia. You've talent, and should keep writing.
You have expressed your feelings very well in this one, at least for me, it
Was almost visible. Thank you.

E.L.

[Cynthia Man]

thank you so much! :D

[de_maruf]

a good story in poem
good work

[Soulfulbubbles]

great write love the last stanza :) keep writing

-kas

[Cynthia Man]

Thank you :))

[Shadow Kat]

Its doesnt suck. Its a story made into a poem, darkness and sorrow, but then warmth and light. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Cynthia Man]

Thanks for your review :D

[Cerise]

hey...amazingly written....the sadness and misery..teh darkness...a feeling a hope for security and warmth...amazing..

[Cynthia Man]

Thank you :DD~