Voice on the phone

 

Voice on the phone

 

Got home from camp

Too many women talking to me

Which do I pick?

I don’t know

Will it be Mieke, Ellen or Rachel,

and whoever else might join my

little show

 

It’s incredibly confusing

I’m not a bad guy

How did I get into this

situation?

How do I get out of it?

I don’t want to lie

So many women

One sounds a little nuts

Why am I so hot for her?

Man this really sucks

Which do I choose?

Please oh God

I could really use your help

 

 

Which one is for me?

Who do I choose?

Do I choose one?

Am I destined to lose?

Please my God

Which one do I choose?

 

 

I promised Rachel that I

was going to call

Mieke’s acting funny

I won’t call her at all

 

Picking up the phone I dial

Rachel’s number

I say hello and she ask who

is it and we talk for hours

 

Thank you God for the answer

I think I’ve found the one for me

I can’t help but be happy

She seems so awesome to me

 

As I listened to her I knew God

had answered my prayers

Thank you oh God for listening

to me

I’ll do my best to be honest with

her

To be good and true

I don’t know how I’ll ever thank you

Thank you holy father for showing me

some love

Reviews

[Flow]

When I first started reading this one, I was laughing because I know that situation and wondering how did this happen that I have interest with so many and the agony of chosing between them when we want to make the best choice yet we are clueless as to how to make that chioce. I like the ending as well because it was spiritual and it seems he found the true love out of the rest. Very good write.. It made me smile!

[Dani California]

Oh this is lovely. I agree it was amusing in the beginning and then turned into more of a spiritual write, leaning on God to show you which woman was the right one for you.

Great poem :) Love conquers all.....