You,me,Us...maybe??

please show me a sign.

Everything leads to you and me.

Clear as day, we are meant to be.

Even the blind can plainly see,

That you plus me equals glee.

 

I do believe you are Mr perfect.

In you I'm yet to find a defect.

You complete my days like a glorious sunset.

You’re worth more than the most prized asset.

 

I've realised that you are my mirror.

You reflect my thoughts, even the most inner.

I could never find one who’s dearer.

I truly feel like the biggest winner.

 

I think about you all the time.

Though technically you are not yet mine.

I wish you would give me a sign.

Then maybe our thoughts will align.

 

I really want to be the one you call baby,

To be your one and only lady.

Maybe you are not quite ready

Till then I wonder...you, me, us...maybe??

          20/11/2015

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"I wish you would give me a sign.

Then maybe our thoughts will align.



I really want to be the one you call baby,

To be your one and only lady."

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I agree with A...on this one...like the layout of the work...

[cycy]

thank you so much

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[A. Amos]

This can be one awesome song...I think anyone can fall in love while reading such a awesome poem...I hope whoever you wrote for would feel the same:) All the best pal!

[cycy]

wow thanks so much amos..day made :)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend

[Sami Khalil]

Lovely, delightful and gleeful. Most of all, very romantic...:).................

[cycy]

thanks for the kind reviews always delightful to get your opinion :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ..)))))))

[Great Aunt Astri]

What a deep wishing well! Enjoyed the rhymes ... some of them lovely and scrunchy!

[cycy]

thanks a lot astri :) always great reading your reviews

[Vikrantsingh]

Enjoyed reading it very nicely crafted.

Keep it up ;)

[cycy]

thanks a lot dear

[Einstein Noodle]

very cute ..i see a young lady standing afar off and in love ..shy ...and making romantic wishes ...blowing kisses ... in fear of heart stitches ...caused by his remisses :)) ok ...enough right!? :))
there is such an innocence in your poem ..i absolutely love it .. the shyness is what strikes me the most .. young ladies these days are far too bold ..and have become the aggressors ... using sexuality instead of faith, respect, and subtle, cautious steps to find true love .. and through all my years i absolutely still believe in it! ;)
E.

[cycy]

kkkkk thanx so much E cutest review ever lol, i just really wish he would give me a sign though. it's almost three months and we click so much but i just don't know if he plans on making it official or maybe he just wants someone to chat with and kill time. what sucks most is that we are just so perfect for each other...arrghhh!! its frustrating really

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmmmmmm can be frustrating for sure ... you be careful with that heart of yours young lady! ;)read moremmmmmmmmmm can be frustrating for sure ... you be careful with that heart of yours young lady! ;)

[Lydia Shutter]

" you plus me equals glee." What a delightful line this is! A romantic plea filled with wonderful rhyming. Could be a song! LydI**

[cycy]

thanx so much dear :) i just wish he knew how much i really want us to be an "us" lolx