Blurred lines

you don't even realise some boundaries are there until you have crossed the line

Mama said be wary of boys
They play around with girls like toys

Straight forward words i did not heed
Not knowing where my actions lead

He swooped in swiftly like a cunning fox
All too willing i opened Pandora's box

Now i have to pay the ultimate cost
Just hoping all is really not lost

No strings attached he calmly said
But now i have to clean the mess he made

Cycy...02/03/2015

 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we react with our hearts rather than our brains when it comes to love...the lines really do get blurred...and the strings don't always appear at first...nice near rhyme in the last stanza.

j.

[cycy]

thanks so much jacob :)

[Blue]

Oh gosh, yes! I agree with your poem and with your caption. It's heartbreaking, really. Btw, I think it "straightforward" is one word.

[cycy]

thanks hunnybun

[Penny]

A cute yet meaningful rambling.. Well done.

[Zachary]

Woah, great words and imagery. Scary too. Like it a lot.

[cycy]

hahah thanks zachary glad you like it hey :)

[A. Amos]

I really did enjoyed every single bit of your poetry...keep it coming my friend!

[cycy]

thank you so much dear friend for taking the time to read, i really apprecdiate it :)

[Lola_Bee]

This is amazing, loved it. It light heated yet its such truth

[cycy]

thanx Lola indeed was tryna highlight something that happens without being too direct and harsh,,thanx again :)

[Sami Khalil]

"He swooped in swiftly like a cunning fox
All too willing i opened Pandora's box"

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Live and learn. When the realizations are set, they hit us like bricks. An excellent one...:).....

[cycy]

live and learn indeed, thanx for stopping by

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome....:).....

[Gee]

Hi CyCy,really enjoyed the read,pity the last line didn't follow suit and rhyme.Just a suggestion,you could say what you've written and rhyme it with something along the lines of,"I've made, now must lay in this bed"

[cycy]

hey gee thanx so much for the review i actually did consider ending with something along the lines of laying in the bed i have made but wanted to get across the point that he is as much to blame as i but thanks hey your review means a lot to me

[Gee]

You are most welcome

[Cassie]

oh Lawd, you opened the pandora box and made him eat the cookie pie....a nice read

[cycy]

hahahahahahahahahah omg Cassie what a review hahahah had me in stitches you truly are adorable,bless..hahah thanks for stopping by