Forever

my wish,dream and prayer...

One wish...
Many would wish for endless riches,
A castle on a mountain,
To visit lovely beaches,
Or to drink youth from a fountain.

One dream...
They dream of fame and fortune
to have the world at their feet
Life's luxuries, on a golden platter'
everyone dancing to their beat.

One prayer...
Some pray for countless years on earth
to live to a hundred and infinity
that life's sorrows may pass them by
that their days may be sunshine and glee.

A silent wish, an unsaid prayer,
A hope filled dream,
a shooting star,
all I want is you,
Forever

Reviews

[Gee]

A lovely poem declaring your love

[cycy]

unfortunately its for a lost love, the 1 that got away :-( thanx for stopping by and for the kind review dear

[Sami Khalil]

"A hope filled dream,
a shooting star,
all I want is Nash,
Forever"

[cycy]

hahahaha oh my...you want Nash forever too??? kikikiki

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. Nope...:)

[cycy]

hahahaah, just making sure ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

:)...................

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Id give it a 100 for sure very beautiful Cycy:)

[cycy]

wow..thank you Jonathan glad you liked it that much

[0000000000000000000000000000]

I did:) don't ever be ashamed of a rating:) I always give 100s anyways:)

[Marie]

I don't know who Nash is, but I know who I'd want forever (Frieda does too.)

[cycy]

That's a good thing hey, to know who you'd want forever :) most don't sadly.

[Frieda P]

Haha who the heck is Nash....wasn't expecting that finish. ;-)

I'll take everything in the first stanza thank you very much.

It has a nice beat and I can dance to it....

[cycy]

hahahahahahaha, only you Frieda can make me laugh till tears are almost oozing out, and of course you would take everything in the first stanza hun.. who wouldn't ;-) lolest, as much as i want Nash forever I'd totally take all the other stuff too :)

[Frieda P]

Ha Nash must be some hunka hunka guy ;-)

[cycy]

hahahahahahaahahaha....yep,that and a whole lot more *wink wink* but he is going to china :-( :'(

[Frieda P]

Forever and ever?............

[cycy]

for the next four years...

[Frieda P]

School?

[cycy]

yeah hey, school

[Lydia Shutter]

All you want is Nash....well, that is a different love poem if ever I read one. That is, of course, assuming Nash is a person. The wishes, prayers and dreams of others matter little.....one has to be an individual and go for the goals self-chosen. The soft nature of your words is enchanting. Lydi**

[cycy]

yes Lydia, Nash is indeed a person..my soulmate actually, but we are in different cities at the moment and in a few days time the distance will increase even more because he is going to China for school and that's just a loot of distance between us, and my wish,prayer and dream is to just have him close to me...forever...

[Lydia Shutter]

I hope for you and Nash, that happens one day. Good Luck.

[cycy]

thank you Lydia for your kind words Lydia :)

[Lydia Shutter]

You're quite welcome!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are talented. I like the form and the poem itself...Pen on...:).............

[cycy]

thank you Sami, glad you liked it hey :)

[Sami Khalil]

I did. You are welcome...:)......................