It won't stop

dear beloved...

As sure as the sky is always blue,
I know your love for me is true.
Though I may not always have a clue,
I'll always stick with you like glue.

As sure as the rivers will always flow,
And the winds of the deserts calmly blow,
The seed of love we both shall sow,
On mountain peaks and valleys low.

As sure as the raindrops always fall,
There is one name that I'll always call.
My love will grow like a great big ball,
Standing firm like a tree stands tall.

As sure as the sun will always shine,
I know for certain that you are mine.
I know at times we may not be fine,
But our love will mature with age like wine.

As sure as the spider will always weave,
I promise your side I'll never leave.

Though right now you can't be here
in my heart you'll always be near.

 

Author's Note

my first attempt at rhyming.

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Let me tell you something, PLEASE RHYME MORE OFTEN :p
It comes naturally to you and it shows, the rhyming doesn't feel forced at all its brilliant.
This was my favorite part :

As sure as the sun will always shine,
I know for certain that you are mine.
I know at times we may not be fine,
But our love will mature with age like wine.

Its such a romantic piece, so full of emotion and meaning, i really got into it, it was touching. I felt every word of every line. My favorite piece of yours no doubt :)
Going in my library :)

[cycy]

wow :) thanks cimmy glad you liked it so much, thought maybe it might be a cheesy hey. I'l definitely try the rhyming more often :) thanks again for the great review, made me smile.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Na i like the cheesy stuff :P
Your most welcome :)
I really liked it :)
please do :)

[cycy]

:) thanks again dear

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your most welcome :)

[stars are far]

that is very amazing..and the rhyme is well..
this love sounds to really be true.. i hope you the best dear

[cycy]

thank you so much Suhad :)

[stars are far]

My pleasure dear

[KWP]

a lovely, happy, warm and wholesome poem..made me smile ... can't believe it is your first time rhyming ... I love rhymes :)

[cycy]

Thank you so much, wow, glad my poem made you smile too :) and I've always been afraid to try rhyming never thought it would work out but since i started i just can't stop, it's so much fun :)

[KWP]

I always find it hard NOT to rhyme ... i think it is because it mirrors my brain always bouncin along xx

[Vikrantsingh]

Well fonts and timing of this poem attracted me to read this till the end of it.

This is very simple yet powerful. I loved it very different and you have shouted out loud with expressing all your feeling with this poem.

Loved it excellent mark.

Cheers!
Singh :)

[cycy]

thank you hey, glad you liked it :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Welcome :)

[Vikrantsingh]

You're Welcome :)

[Average person]

Quite lovely :) rhyme scheme is great and it was very well written. Great job :3

[cycy]

thank you :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

I like the rhyming, and this poem is very lovely.

[cycy]

Thanx Brittany, your love poems about your hubby inspired me to also try out a love poem too, and glad the rhyming worked out well too :)

[Shirlena]

I'm not big on rhyming although I do at times because "the muse" takes me in that direction, I do love the content of your poem and think you did an excellent job at rhyming...just cause it isn't my preference doesn't mean it still isn't good and it is :).

[cycy]

thanks dear, I'm also not specifically a fan of rhyming but i just wanted to try something

[max_vonnegut]

Great job!! I'm glad I read this is so good cycy. It
It's not cliche and boring like a bunch of other poems on love. Thank you for sharing.

[cycy]

Thanx mat, glad u enjoyed it cause this was my first time actually trying out a love poem and the whole rhyming thing as well, glad it worked out well :)

[max_vonnegut]

You're welcome, you totally killed it.

[Sami Khalil]

A beautiful and sweet poem with nice rhyming scheme...Bravo.............

[cycy]

thank you very much hey, i wanted to try something a bit different from what i usually write

[Sami Khalil]

Always good...You are welcome...:).....................

[Blue]

An endless love. Everyone wants that. Nash is lucky to receive that from you.

[cycy]

thanks Arzel, I'm sure he knows that too :)

[Cassie]

nice poem to nash. I hope she read it.

[cycy]

Nash is actually a guy hey.. lolest, and thank you for the review :)