BE YOU

BE YOU

A Poem by cyber dork
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creation of anything needs creativity and without we would be dull damn boring

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Roses are red violets are blue

What lame way to start a poem dead and done damn

Let’s see why people always do that copy peoples work

And add some crap to it come on be creative u son of a b**ch

Why not say something like

 I got u some roses and I love how they make me think of you

Not very creative but damn better than some

Come on man creativity is how every thing as come to be and with lack of

 U will be left behind damn man be u and see how much people like you so

Let’s see who can be creative enough to tell me off for shooting you down

Come on don’t be a b**ch lolzzzes

© 2010 cyber dork


Author's Note

cyber dork
give me the creativity and review with any thing at all just be craetive its a challenge man be a man and stand up to it ...................................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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a creative review how so i must ask. a review is to review what has been written not to write something to it. Its strange to see how all these people do hav no creativity, but for some you gotta give em slack because they have nothing in their head and creativity the much lack. ive been ryhming in and out, its quite bothersome to me because i hate ryhming so im done for now, u want real creativity. read some of my work and tell me what you think!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Bet you'd make a good rapper.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a creative review how so i must ask. a review is to review what has been written not to write something to it. Its strange to see how all these people do hav no creativity, but for some you gotta give em slack because they have nothing in their head and creativity the much lack. ive been ryhming in and out, its quite bothersome to me because i hate ryhming so im done for now, u want real creativity. read some of my work and tell me what you think!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey Dork..!
Yeah, you.
Write something else.
Aiight? Don't shoot the creatively challenged ones down.
Or I'll sit on you again. =D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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cyber dork
cyber dork

kingston, caribbean, Jamaica



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well ilove any thing tht makes me laugh and i like short stuff so ill be brief thts funny any way i like people and i like to talk and see wht i can do for u i live in ja and really lik it here jus ki.. more..

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